Sunday, April 12, 2015

Open Prompt Part 2



2003. According to critic Northrop Frye, “Tragic heroes are so much the highest points in their human landscape that they seem the inevitable conductors of the power about them, great trees more likely to be struck by lightning than a clump of grass. Conductors may of course be instruments as well as victims of the divisive lightning.” Select a novel or play in which a tragic figure functions as an instrument of the suffering of others. Then write an essay in which you explain how the suffering brought upon others by that figure contributes to the tragic vision of the work as a whole.
In Hamlet, by William Shakespeare, Hamlet is a perfect tragic hero. He is of noble birth and his tragic flaw is his inability to make decisions which is exacerbated by his isolation. Because of his tragic flaw, Ophelia is driven to commit suicide, his mother, uncle and Laertes are all killed, and his kingdom is to be run by a foreigner. Hamlet is made a tragic work by Hamlet because his tragic flaw eventually brings down the kingdom and everyone in it.
Hamlet begins with the pivotal moment that turns Hamlet into a tragic hero. His father, King Hamlet, has died and comes back to Hamlet as a ghost and tells him that Claudius, the king's brother, murdered him and Hamlet must get revenge. This sets up Hamlet's single task that dominates the entirety of the play. Hamlet has all kinds of power and prestige, but he cannot accomplish this simple task.
The first person who Hamlet causes to suffer is his girlfriend, Ophelia. He knows that Claudius and Polonius will use her to get to Hamlet, so he curses her and says he never wants to see her again. He then stabs her father when Polonius is spying on him and Gertrude, because he thinks Polonius is Claudius. Ophelia is possibly pregnant at this time and her father has been killed and she goes insane and drowns herself. Hamlet caused this by killing Polonius and being incredibly awful to her. The death of Polonius and Ophelia also causes an incredible amount of suffering for Laertes.
Hamlet causes the suffering of his entire country in the end. Because of the deaths of Ophelia and Polonius, Laertes does what Hamlet cannot; takes his revenge. He battles Hamlet, using a poisoned sword and poisoned wine. The wine kills Gertrude and the sword kills Claudius, Hamlet, and Laertes. This allows Fortinbras to overtake Elsinore because everyone who has a claim to the throne is dead.
If Hamlet had been decisive enough to immediately kill Claudius, he would not have led to the destruction of his entire family and girlfriend. He had all the tools he needed and had several opportunities to do the deed, but he was unable to do it.

3 comments:

  1. Hey Alice!
    Nice essay! It's pretty good overall, and I think it would score around a 6 or 7. I personally feel like you are summarizing a tad bit too much in the middle of the essay. If you broke that up and did more analysis and explained how each part better contributed to the meaning of the work, your essay would be stronger. You did this near the end and that was somewhat redeeming, but it could have been stronger if you had been doing it throughout. The essay was still good, but if you did this (in my opinion) it would have been an 8. Keep it up!

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  2. Alice, Nice essay! I thought it was very strong, the length is perfect for a free response essay. I agree with Jaikishan that you could’ve expanded the middle and gone into more detail, but that didn’t take too much away from the essay overall. It’s hard to remember exact details of books when you’re under a ton of pressure during the actual AP exam, so I think that it’s fine. Expand the details a little and you’re gonna be solid. Great work!

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  3. Hey Alice, nice job on your response! Jaikishan and Matt basically expressed already my one concern: more detail in the middle than actual analysis and expansion on your ideas. Otherwise I really liked how well your essay flowed together. Just fix that one little issue and you're golden. Again, great job!

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