These past few weeks we have started to begin class with analyzing the mood and atmosphere of a picture. We begin by picking an image and a single word that describes it and then writing a paragraph that makes the reader feel the word without stating it. I do think that this has been helpful although I haven't had any immediate way to use this and see what I have learned from this.
My least favorite, but probably the most vital, thing that we have done is practicing writing introductions in short amounts of time. I definitely need more practice with this because I can't seem to understand what answers the question and does not acknowledge the question has been asked. The only other essays I have had to write have been for AP World and APUSH, and the introductions followed a strict format for those. We also did some multiple choice practice. I'm not sure if the section was easier, but the most recent time we did it I did much better than the previous one.
In class we discussed Death of a Salesman more and read some essays about what defines a tragedy and whether Death of a Salesman counts as one. I think this idea of words meaning different things to different people applies in so much of life and I am always so shocked by how offended people can get by a single word. So what if Death of a Salesman is a tragedy? Why does this word hold such intense meaning?
The most recent thing we have done is read Hamlet out loud as a class. I don't think any of us could read it on our own at this point so having the whole class do it is helpful.
Sunday, November 16, 2014
Monday, November 10, 2014
Death of a Salesman Close Reading
Characters:
Biff: stops blindly following his father and provides some hope for the future.
Happy:follows in his fathers footsteps, a player
Linda: Madonna, loves Willy and views him as a child
Mistress: whore, gets kicked around
Willy: has big dreams and high expectations, daddy problems
Bernard: actually successful because his father doesn't push him to be something he isn't
Plot:
Willy is a salesman living with his wife Linda and his two adult sons. He is growing older and is not capable of driving back and forth to New England to sell things like he used to. Biff and Happy are disappointments to him, but he also contradicts himself often and says how wonderful and hardworking they are. Right from the beginning of the play Willy has many flashbacks involving his brother Ben, who became very wealthy, and the boys younger days when they adored him. Throughout the play Willy becomes more and more confused and has these flashbacks often. Linda tells her sons this and Biff promises to meet with Bill Oliver and ask for a loan so he can provide for his family. She continues to try and find out why Biff and Willy do not get along, while the audience learns that Biff walked in on his father having an affair. Willy goes to his boss to ask for a job that does not require so much driving, gets fired, and then refuses a job from his friend Charlie who has been lending him money. Willy goes from here to a restaurant where he is meeting Biff and Happy to talk about Biff's meeting with Bill Oliver. This turns into a very emotional scene when Biff tries to stop lying and tell his father that his perception of life is not reality. The play ends with Willy killing himself just as the mortgage on their house is payed off, and no one attends the funeral except the family.
Theme: The sense of entitlement for the idealized American Dream of financial and social prosperity can lead to tragedy.
Quotes:
"We're free" This is what Linda says at the end of the play after Willy kills himself. She is referring to the fact that the mortgage on their house is finally payed off.
"He's liked, but not well liked" Willy repeats this throughout the play showing that he believes a personal touch is necessary is business. He thinks being known and liked is important, but this is proved wrong when he is fired by his boss after thirty years.
Setting: This is set in urban America in the 1940's, when business began to grow rapidly. The setting is important because the whole play is about the apartments, and business, encroaching and ruining the Loemans lives.
Title: Death of a Salesman. Willy says he wanted to be a salesman because he heard of an 80 year old man who would call up anyone he wanted and sell to them from his home, and could earn a living this way. Willy said this man had the "death of a salesman" and this is what he desired.
Biff: stops blindly following his father and provides some hope for the future.
Happy:follows in his fathers footsteps, a player
Linda: Madonna, loves Willy and views him as a child
Mistress: whore, gets kicked around
Willy: has big dreams and high expectations, daddy problems
Bernard: actually successful because his father doesn't push him to be something he isn't
Plot:
Willy is a salesman living with his wife Linda and his two adult sons. He is growing older and is not capable of driving back and forth to New England to sell things like he used to. Biff and Happy are disappointments to him, but he also contradicts himself often and says how wonderful and hardworking they are. Right from the beginning of the play Willy has many flashbacks involving his brother Ben, who became very wealthy, and the boys younger days when they adored him. Throughout the play Willy becomes more and more confused and has these flashbacks often. Linda tells her sons this and Biff promises to meet with Bill Oliver and ask for a loan so he can provide for his family. She continues to try and find out why Biff and Willy do not get along, while the audience learns that Biff walked in on his father having an affair. Willy goes to his boss to ask for a job that does not require so much driving, gets fired, and then refuses a job from his friend Charlie who has been lending him money. Willy goes from here to a restaurant where he is meeting Biff and Happy to talk about Biff's meeting with Bill Oliver. This turns into a very emotional scene when Biff tries to stop lying and tell his father that his perception of life is not reality. The play ends with Willy killing himself just as the mortgage on their house is payed off, and no one attends the funeral except the family.
Theme: The sense of entitlement for the idealized American Dream of financial and social prosperity can lead to tragedy.
Quotes:
"We're free" This is what Linda says at the end of the play after Willy kills himself. She is referring to the fact that the mortgage on their house is finally payed off.
"He's liked, but not well liked" Willy repeats this throughout the play showing that he believes a personal touch is necessary is business. He thinks being known and liked is important, but this is proved wrong when he is fired by his boss after thirty years.
Setting: This is set in urban America in the 1940's, when business began to grow rapidly. The setting is important because the whole play is about the apartments, and business, encroaching and ruining the Loemans lives.
Title: Death of a Salesman. Willy says he wanted to be a salesman because he heard of an 80 year old man who would call up anyone he wanted and sell to them from his home, and could earn a living this way. Willy said this man had the "death of a salesman" and this is what he desired.
Sunday, November 9, 2014
Close Reading #3
In recent years parenting has taken on new and completely consuming expectations. In Our 'Mommy' Problem, Heather Havrileskay talks about how this effects mothers and why it is a problem. She uses diction, figurative language and details, to show how being titled as only a mother can be a negative thing.
Havrilesky uses diction to show that she feels the expectation of mothers to be "moms" all the time is unreasonable. In the first paragraph she uses the word "violently" to describe the change in women becoming mothers but also says one stays the same underneath. The role a mother is expected to take is described as "all encompassing" which is used to prove Havrileskys point that motherhood is now viewed as a task that requires constant attention. In the fourth paragraph the word "mommies" is used to show how a group of women can be classed together only by the act of having children, and also makes the piece less formal. In the next paragraph Havrilesky talks about how mothers are seen as an "alien" breed, cut off from the rest of the world because of their parent status. Diction is also used to display sarcasm, such as jokingly repeating the word "mommies" after discussing how a group of parents were described as this and calling mothers "a strange breed".
Havrileskys use of figurative language starts in the first paragraph when she relates becoming a mother to a weather forcaster saying that a tornado will give a town "an extreme makeover". She is trying to show that she understands that becoming a parent is a huge change, but then the rest of the essay shows why being a mother is not the only character trait a woman with children possesses. Havrilesky also brings up the "Mommy bow", or the imaginary thing that a mother is supposed to be; one person that can be neatly described and placed in a box as a mother.
Detail is used in this piece to show specific examples of people being classified as only mothers, and to bring to light the unrealistic expectations society has for these people. Havrilesky used examples of everything; Mothers are displayed unrealistically in TV, movies, and modern fiction. She discusses specific events such as being referred to a group of mommies at a soccer game and an example of a man mocking her and some friends at a bar. These details add credibility and highlight the specific issue in society today.
In recent years more and more has been expected of being a mother, an already daunting task. Havrilesky eloquently shows the unfairness of this stereotyping and categorizing through memorable words, specific details, and figurative language.
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